Puisi Surga

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A Placed Named Nirvana

In my dream…

Long time ago, I walked in a normal placed named earth.

I just saw an ordinary life.

Now, I walked in a chaostic placed named earth.

It’s filled with arrogant creature named human.

They are so absurd.

Some of them say “I will rule the world”

Some of them say “I would rather life in peace”

And some of them say “I do not care…”

In a placed named earth.

One day I met an old man.

Walking in a crowd.

But he walked to opposite way.

I asked him “Wait, who are you ?”

He said “Who am I ? You just walked above me.”

I was so astonished and said “I just met you, and you said that I walked above you ?”

He said “Look at around !”

I was looking at the crowded people and said “They are so messy!”

I look at the building, they are so huge…

Sky was so black.

Guess what I saw hungry people everywhere.

And rich people that have no mercy.

He said a again “I was so green… I was so peace”

“What! So you are earth. And what happened to you?” I said.

“I am tired…”

“It can’t be!!! So where I can find a better place? A peaceful place

And life in together humanity and love?”

“Go there…”

“Where?”

“There…”

“Where…?”

“Nirvana…”

I woke up.

And that just still a dream for me.

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